tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501628271029707506.post1234127066424505480..comments2023-10-26T03:48:18.952-07:00Comments on Tarun's World: रोटीtarunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04011710244474315903noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501628271029707506.post-39588185306656862222011-04-24T04:33:55.073-07:002011-04-24T04:33:55.073-07:00KUCHH EHSAAS JO KAGAZ PAR UKERNI CHAHIYE......YE W...KUCHH EHSAAS JO KAGAZ PAR UKERNI CHAHIYE......YE WAHI HAI......kant sharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09665206258913852085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501628271029707506.post-5152304182544638822011-03-16T06:58:06.739-07:002011-03-16T06:58:06.739-07:00Buddy Its awesome. I really liked it.... Keep it u...Buddy Its awesome. I really liked it.... Keep it up dude .... <br /><br />AmitAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11639092128241321703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501628271029707506.post-59644667212816626332010-12-18T07:14:56.895-08:002010-12-18T07:14:56.895-08:00tarun ji dil ko chhu gayi ye rachna ....is kavita ...tarun ji dil ko chhu gayi ye rachna ....is kavita mein marmikta ka ant nahiDevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05009376638678868909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501628271029707506.post-79968207440991588372010-12-14T08:13:43.676-08:002010-12-14T08:13:43.676-08:00dear tarun though the lines are very very thouchy ...dear tarun though the lines are very very thouchy but frankly there are roughly 3000 poems and proses on such subject matter with d same sense of emotions [ma , roti, chulha, bhai behan, partition, then request to stop such mistakes]as for as my knowledge is concern [plz dont mind].... kabhi kabhi anayas kalam kagaj par kuch shabdo ko uker deti hai """" jaise""" >>>>jinadagi ki visaat pe kya haar hai kya jeet hai, dilon ko choo le jo bahee jagjeet hai // ik kadam chaloge tum ban kar kisi ka sahara,,, samandar ki kya majaal hai, beech lehroo ke rahegaa kadmoo mein kinaara...<br /><br />arun atript<br />[nyayvid, soochnaprodyogikivid, ayuvedaachaarya, jyotishvid, yog and dhyaanachaarya]....एक अबोध बालक😊अरुण अतृप्तhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10723510823284555037noreply@blogger.com